Bitter Creek Series #11 & Mail Order Brides #3


The sensational third novel in Joan Johnston’s new Western historical romance series set in the world of Bitter Creek.


When Karl Norwood’s mail-order bride meets an untimely demise on the way to the Montana Territory, Hetty Wentworth steps in to take her place. Hetty has no idea how she’s going to pretend to be all the things she isn’t—including the mother of two kids. She only knows her deception is necessary if she’s going to save two orphans from the awful fate she suffered as a child.

Karl smells a rat when a much younger woman than he was expecting arrives with two children who look nothing like her. But his mail-order bride is so beautiful, he doesn’t object—until he realizes that his charming new wife has been lying . . . about everything. Can a woman forced to keep secrets and a man hindered by distrust ever hope to find happily ever after in each other’s arms?

    • Format: Mass Market
    • Publisher: Dell (January 7, 2014)
    • ISBN-13: 978-0-440-22380-1
    • Price: $7.99

Chapter 1

“Don’t you dare strike that child!”  Henrietta Wentworth set her plate of hardtack and beans aside and rose from her seat on a fallen log beside the campfire.

“He’s my son.  I’ll hit him if I want.”  Mrs. Lucille Templeton had grabbed her seven-year-old son, Griffin, by the arm as he tried to escape after “accidentally” dropping a plate of beans he was bringing her into her lap.

“Look at my dress!” Mrs. Templeton wailed, staring down at a green-velvet-trimmed traveling dress that was clearly ruined.  She tightened her grip until the boy grimaced and said, “This fiendish brat spilled that plate on purpose.  He deserves the whipping he’s going to get.”

Hetty balled her fists and took three steps to put herself toe-to-toe with Mrs. Templeton.  “You will beat that child over my dead body.  Let him go.”

“Hah!” Mrs. Templeton snorted.  Nevertheless, she loosened her grip, and Griffin jerked free and fled.  He disappeared behind the Conestoga wagon in which they’d all been traveling from Cheyenne, in the Wyoming Territory, to Butte, in the Montana Territory, where Mrs. Templeton was destined to become a mail-order bride.

The hodgepodge Templeton family included the widow Templeton, her nine-year-old daughter Grace, and her seven-year-old son Griffin.  Hetty had trouble imagining how Mrs. Templeton had produced a daughter as kind as Grace, although she had no doubt how she’d spawned a hellion like Griffin.

Nevertheless, not one of the three Templetons looked like any of the others or seemed anywhere near their professed ages.

Mrs. Templeton, with her dyed blond hair, mud-brown eyes, and substantial figure, looked considerably older than twenty-eight.

Grace was plump, had flyaway red hair and green eyes, and was already sprouting small buds on her chest, which told Hetty she was more likely twelve or thirteen than the nine she professed to be.

Her brother, Griffin, was a skinny stripling with dark brown eyes and tangled black hair that made Hetty itch to take a brush to it.  Hetty figured he’d last seen the age of seven three or four years ago.

No less odd was the short, slender, but very strong young Chinese man who was their guide, protector, and driver, Mr. Lin Bao, who said he’d come to America ten years ago to work on the transcontinental railroad.  Hetty had learned that the Chinese put their family name first, so Mr. Lin’s first name was Bao, which he’d told her rhymed with cow.  Mr. Lin now worked for the man who would become Mrs. Templeton’s husband, Mr. Karl Norwood.

“If I’d had my way, Miss High-and-Mighty,” Mrs. Templeton muttered as she lifted her skirts to dump beans from its folds, “we would have left you to rot in that wagon where we found you.”

Hetty had no doubt of that.  She’d never met a lazier or more selfish person in her life than Lucille Templeton.  It was appalling that she owed this woman her life.

Mrs. Templeton had forced Mr. Lin to stop near the apparently abandoned Conestoga wagon because she’d wanted to scavenge whatever remained inside.  Someone had already looted the wagon.  All she’d discovered was Hetty, dehydrated, weak from loss of blood, and with a wound that had become infected from the arrow deeply embedded in her shoulder.

If not for Mrs. Templeton’s avarice, Hetty would be dead.

Although, honestly, it was Mr. Lin’s doctoring that had kept her alive.  He’d used mysterious medicines from the orient to bring Hetty back to life over the past seven weeks as they’d traveled north.  Mrs. Templeton claimed to be a nurse, but she didn’t seem to know much about caring for anyone.  Hetty shot a quick look at the young Chinaman, who was still sitting quietly beside the fire smoking a long, curved white clay pipe.

“If it had been up to you, Lucy,” a young female voice accused, “you would have left Hetty in that wagon to die.”

Hetty hadn’t seen Grace approaching from the opposite side of the campfire, but she’d seen the girl defend her brother from their mother’s slaps often enough to know that where Griffin was, Grace was never far behind.

“I’ll take care of this, Grace,” Hetty said, knowing that Mrs. Templeton was still angry enough to lash out at her daughter.

Her warning came too late.  Mrs. Templeton reached out her arm like a lizard’s tongue, grabbed a handful of Grace’s tumbled red curls, and yanked hard.  “You’re the one to blame for this.  I never should have brought the two of you along.”

Grace shot a fearful look in Hetty’s direction.

Hetty couldn’t imagine having a mother who wished she’d left her children behind.  A mother who felt free to slap faces and yank hair.  A mother who considered her children a nuisance.  No wonder Grace looked so scared.

Hetty’s heart went out to the girl.  Hetty’s own wonderful, loving parents had been lost three years ago, in the Great Chicago Fire, when Mrs. O’Leary’s cow had kicked over a lantern and burned down most of the city, including the Wentworth family mansion and her father’s bank.

Overnight, Hetty had gone from being the pampered daughter of wealthy parents to being an orphan stuck in the Chicago Institute for Orphaned Children.  Her uncle Stephen had left Hetty and her three sisters and two brothers at the orphanage even after they’d begged him to rescue them from the cruelty of the headmistress, Miss Iris Birch.

Miss Birch, like Mrs. Templeton, seemed to find joy in brutality against those weaker than herself.  Every infraction at the Institute had been punished with three–“You’re lucky it’s only three!” Miss Birch was fond of saying–vicious strokes of a birch rod.

Hetty forced her thoughts away from her five siblings, who were all lost . . . or dead . . . but certainly gone.  She couldn’t do anything to help them.  But she could help Grace.

“What I said about Griffin goes for Grace, too,” Hetty said.  “Let her go.”

Mrs. Templeton twisted Grace’s hair until the girl whimpered and stood on tiptoes to avoid the pain.  “This is my kid.  I’ll do with her as I like.”

“Not while I’m here, you won’t.”  Hetty obeyed a sudden impulse, and her balled fist struck Mrs. Templeton in the nose.

“Ow!”  Mrs. Templeton released Grace and grabbed her bloodied nose.  “You’ll pay for that!”

Instead of running like Griffin had, Grace stood and watched with anxious eyes.  “Please, Lucy,” the girl pleaded.  “I’m sorry.  Griffin’s sorry.”

“Shut up, you ungrateful whelp!” Mrs. Templeton snarled.

That was another strange thing about the Templeton family.  Hetty couldn’t imagine calling her own mother by her first name, yet both children called their mother Lucy.  Nor could she imagine any mother calling her daughter an “ungrateful whelp.”

Hetty should have known better than to think Mrs. Templeton wouldn’t strike back.  A moment later she felt nails claw their way across her face, narrowly missing her left eye.  One of the scratches across her brow bled profusely, blurring Hetty’s vision on that side.  She almost missed seeing Mrs. Templeton bend to pick up a heavy dead branch.

“Lucy, don’t!” Grace cried.  And then, to Hetty, “Look out!”

Hetty bent backward as Mrs. Templeton swung the unwieldy weapon but lost her balance and fell into a clump of buffalo grass.  Hetty made the mistake of trying to push herself upright with her injured shoulder and yelped in pain.  Even after seven weeks, it wasn’t healed enough to support her.  She was stuck on the ground, a sitting duck the next time Mrs. Templeton swiped at her with that heavy branch.

Mrs. Templeton must have realized Hetty’s predicament, because she uttered a shout of triumph.  However, the ponderous weight of the branch as it continued its sweeping arc had dragged her sideways.  Instead of letting go of the branch to regain her balance, she held on, and her momentum forced her several steps backward.

Hetty heard Mr. Lin yelling something behind her, but she was too busy trying to avoid being brained by the tree branch to pay attention.  She heard Mrs. Templeton cry out and wondered if Grace had somehow intervened to save her.

Hetty looked up in time to see Mrs. Templeton’s arms flailing as she tripped backward over a large stone.  She finally let go of the branch, which flew several feet upward before it began falling, falling, disappearing from sight before ever hitting the ground.

Hetty struggled to her feet, recognizing at last what Mr. Lin had been shouting.  “Be careful!” she cried.  “The cliff!”

She got one last look at Mrs. Templeton’s face in the firelight–a ghoulish mask of fury–before the woman fell backward out of sight.

Her shrill scream seemed to go on endlessly.  Then it stopped.

Hetty dashed with Grace toward the edge of the hundred-foot rock cliff that had been visible in the daylight when they’d camped, but which had disappeared beyond the light of the campfire after dark.  She felt sick with grief and regret.  She’d only wanted to protect Grace and Griffin.  Instead she’d made them orphans.  She couldn’t do anything right!  Mr. Lin should have let her die.

“Watch out!” Hetty gasped as she put a hand across Grace’s waist to keep the girl away from the edge.  She could see nothing in the blackness below.

Grace kept repeating, “Oh, no.  Oh, no.  Oh, no.”

“What happened?” Griffin called out.  “Did the witch hurt herself?”

Grace turned on her brother as he appeared in the light of the campfire and said, “The witch is dead.”

Hetty stared at the two children, dismayed at what they were saying about the woman who’d borne them.  “What’s wrong with you?” she asked Grace.  “Your mother has just died a ghastly death.”

“She wasn’t our mom!” Griffin retorted.